It doesnt look like you took any of your own pictures and I think that the background would of looked better if you added in some colour. Another thing I would like to add is that I dont think the Kelsey Prak logo that you designed and placed at the top left hand ocerner of your design suits that whole magazine cover all together. You have also left eh box around your text so it doesnt look very nice, I believe that you could of done so much better to me this does not look like a sixth from standard piece of work.
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ReplyDeleteIt doesnt look like you took any of your own pictures and I think that the background would of looked better if you added in some colour. Another thing I would like to add is that I dont think the Kelsey Prak logo that you designed and placed at the top left hand ocerner of your design suits that whole magazine cover all together. You have also left eh box around your text so it doesnt look very nice, I believe that you could of done so much better to me this does not look like a sixth from standard piece of work.
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